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Every time Alice looks down at herself, all she feels is pain.
Pain, pain descending from the shattering heart she has within her.
Every time Alice looks in the mirror, all she sees is sadness.
Sadness eroding from her drooping blue eyes, and sadness everywhere.

Does no one like her?

Every time Alice thinks of her family, all she feels is anguish.
Why would they leave her all by herself?
All by herself with all the undesired?
Why is she undesired?

Every time Alice sees everyone leaving her to play alone, her heart drops.
Her shattered soul grieves more tears when she sees that she was not chosen.
Why was she not chosen?
Undesired? Maybe. But why?

Every time Alice looks at all the other children playing and laughing, all she feels is anger.
She is no longer sad,
Her heart is no longer dropping.
Her eyes are ignited with fiery bursts of rage.

Every time Alice looks at the deserted playground, where the other children once played......
She remembers how she was undesired once.
She feels a whole string of emotions return, all braided into one big piece.
The broken mirror sure brings back memories, doesn't it? But Alice can't piece them back together.

Every time Alice cries, she remembers how her heart still grieves.
She remembers that terrible thing she did to all the children,
And her heart drops even more.
Now Alice saves all the hatred for herself, because there is no one else to share it with.
©2009 =birdluvr109
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Author's Comments

Poor Alice.........
I just got inspired to write this poem. My sister is an amazing poet, and I was just thinking of everything she wrote. I've been wanting to write some poetry lately, but I've never gotten inspired, that is, until now. This one is one of my favorites. It really makes me think. I think I was just venting out the remainder of my confused feelings on this one, because it's not exactly clear to anyone else but me.
Why did I call the young girl Alice? No major reason. I just had the gut instinct to choose that name. I like it. :)

:star: Entry for [link] "Darkness In My Soul" contest.

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wait this is from your confused thoughts?? if so.... :noes: :( you are never alone :) cause im with ya in spirit, so i guess im always stalking you in spirit XDD jk

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In a way....... I'm just naturally confusing, I guess XD

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Awesome job! And congratulations for winning 1st place! :D

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thank you so much!

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:blackrose: Hold on to the world we all remember fighting for,
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Hold on to the world we all remember dying for,
There's still hope left in it yet...:blackrose:
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no problem!

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Contest by WargusEstor.
Theme: Darkness in my Soul

Please join this contest. You may win 1st place for some spectacular things. Also, it would be fun to do. ^_^
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:blowkiss: :)

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:blackrose: Hold on to the world we all remember fighting for,
There's still strength left in us yet
Hold on to the world we all remember dying for,
There's still hope left in it yet...:blackrose:
Arise - Flyleaf
•¤Hannah¤•

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